My rating: 2 of 5 stars
I wanted to really like this book, and it does have an overall good idea in the world building and interactions between the different packs. While Sophia's situation does improve dramatically, can't help but also feel bad for Callan. While they get the ending they want more or less, it turns out a lot of the people closest to the two of them really can't and shouldn't be trusted. It's also amazing how for being an Alpha's daughter and seeing as much as she has, Sophia has remained so naive and gullible overall when it comes to interacting with others. She's lucky her real mate is actually decent and not someone like Alexander, though that's sort of the entire premise of the book.
The writing is not edited well however, with entire segments duplicated, names mixed up, words used that make no sense in the context of the sentence they are in, and formatted in very short chapters almost more like a piece of online fanfiction rather than a published work. The app that it is advertised to read on also lags horribly, to the point that it would ask me if I wanted to force close or wait for it to process new chapters. It looks like this is part of a series that can be purchased on Amazon rather than reading on the app. I won't be buying it due to the overall quality of the writing, but would perhaps say it's an option for those who do not wish to worry about the app use. Will be removing the app and not reading more stories on it as it becomes an exercise in frustration just to try and finish the book.
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